I like it, but not all that much. I has some good parts, and the overall feel is pretty good. Yet there is some things that could be better.
I like the intro a lot, and the build up at 00:16.
But after that it is just very repetive as you pointed out yourself.
I also hate that sound that comes in at 00:38.
To do list:
1. Remove the sound that you introduce at 00:38.
2. Since you don't have any vocals then add a melody or something after 00:16 so it's not just bass all the way.
3. Add some brakes or some chances in the notes here and there so it doesn't get too repetive.
- Hope that could help, Th.
Did you like our beats?
Nope... I didn't. It's not hardcore nor gabber, it's not funny at all and most important... It sounds realy bad.
Hey cool song! I really liked i alot! Especially that "Errr" kind of sound that starts at 00:37.
That piano was kick ass and fited to the rest of the song very well!
My only problem was your big need of bass, like Box-Killa pointed outh...
Other then that awesome!
PS. I was just about to give this a 6 so it could be like:
lol, at the 6,7,8, i would not have minded
You are new to making music? Dude... This is awesome!!
I like it!
I like it!
The only down part is how it goes up and down in volume at the begining... You should do something about that...
sure im still workin on it ;)
This is good!
Good melodys. A little weak bass... And not loud enough at the main parts.
Also it goes up and down in volume in a weird way at some points.
I agree! I focused on other parts of the song and didn't fix up my bass, thanks for pointing it out.
This is pretty good!
The sound in the intro was a litle too sharp.
And i didn't like the space between the notes at 01:10...
Else nice work!
Keep it up!
And yes it's a happy place indeed!
This is truly an amazing peace of art.
If i was able to make music half as good as you i would be able to die a happy man with "a music genius" writen on my grave stone!
Also this song has an outstanding ability to loop with me barely even noticing, whitc adds up for its shortness. I listened to this song for 20 times in a row now and it havent got boring at all!
What i am trying to say is:
You are a motherf**king genius! There i said it!
haha this is really flattering.
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